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JetravenEx

aka Jetclaw

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  • I live in Fanfiction.net/BlogClan depends on the day and the weather.
  • I was born on April 6
  • My occupation is Warrior of BlogClan, applying for overlord of the Bakugan fandom
  • I am Female
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  • Hey! I just saw you wanted to join Once in a Lifetime a while ago, Sorry for not getting back to you. Are you still interested? :)

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    • It sounds very interesting I look forwards to reading the story when you start posting chapters.

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    • awesome, thanks! hopefully it'll be soon :D

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  • Heya, Jetty! Two things today;

    1. Thank you so much for the birthday wishes <3

    2. You have an article pending from the end of August, titled "Rewriting Ashfur - unfinished". I'm not certain if it was Russet who added the unfinished part, but it does seem unfinished, as it cuts off right after a comma. Would you like this article to be sent to you so that you may finish it, or would you like me to just delete the article?

    Thank you!

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    • Eh I didn’t know it was marked unfinished, I thought I finished it.

      I’ll have a look at it, I may have put a comma instead of a period or it somehow got cut off

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    • Ashfur is a character I dislike because he got an outcome I feel was undeserved. As a cat who attempted to murder four cats (Firestar, Hollyleaf, Lionblaze and Jayfeather) he should've gone to the Dark Forest. Instead we get a line about him loving too much and that somehow is supposed to fix everything.
      As I've grown older, I've read stories that have of examples of people who are unfortunately similar to Ashfur, not in the 'I have a crush on you, but you don't love me, that justifies me killing those around you to make you pay', more in the, 'I want you, but you refuse to be with me so I'll try to make your life a living nightmare'. There's not a large difference, but the murder is the thing that earns Ashfur The Dark Forest no matter what the books say.
      However, if Ashfur were to have been rewritten, and the murder parts removed, Hawkfrost using someone else to get to Firestar, he can still be a giant yandere to Squirrelflight just not a murderous one.
      Yandere literally translate to love sick, and in many pop culture stuff is represented by a crazy person who is determined to do everything they can to get the person they love. From manipulating others relationships, to offing people, to bribes they'll do anything to get the one they desire. Because they're love sick.
      Now we've seen some nasty, mean, and callous cats make it to StarClan (Rainflower and Appledusk namely). So if Ashfur didn't attempt to kill anyone his path to StarClan would be more reasonable with the excuse that he 'loved too much'
      He could still pose a threat to Squirrelflight, just not exactly a life threatening one... as much.
      A thought I had was what if he didn't agree to help Hawkfrost kill Firestar, I have no doubt Hawkfrost would've found some other way, but what if instead when Squirrelflight left with Leafpool he followed them and learned the secret then and there.
      While yes it was 'official medicine cat business' he was willing to bar three cats from escaping a fire and lead his clan leader into a trap, ignoring the official business and following them wouldn't be too out of character.
      He could totally mess up their lives, either from realizing Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw hadn't had kits yet (opening the door for him) or from going out to Leafpool and Squirrelflight and threatening to reveal their secret and have Leafpool and her kits driven out.
      There's a number of terrible ways it could go, he could force Squirrelflight to claim that they were his and her kits still protecting Leafpool but alienating Brambleclaw and causing great pain to Squirrelflight.
      Or he could make small demands of them every now and then while holding the secret hostage.
      But it doesn't have to just be the secret. Ashfur in Sunset showed how he was willing to cast doubt on Leafpools integrity because she was Squirrelflights sister trying to promote Squirrelflights mate.
      Ashfur could easily spread some rumors here and there, Leafpools been talking with Crowfeather again, or Lionpaws been passing intel to WindClan in the tunnels (if he discovered him and heatherpaw at the time Lionpaw was occasionally training with Tigerstar and Hawkfrost and developing strange wounds overnight, Ashfur could get curious what the son of the cat he loves is up to and follows him and discovers them meeting). Now Lionpaws in hot water, causing strife for his mother without spilling a drop of blood.
      The potential ways Ashfur could muck up Squirrelflights and her kits lives are numerous. What if since he knew Hawkfrost wanted help he agreed to help only to try to expose Brambleclaw as a traitor to the clan. I think that's what he did want to do, so in this case it'd be him actually succeeding in doing so. Or planning it so rather than Firestar getting trapped he warnedFirestar of Hawkfrost and Brambleclaw treachery or even announces it to the clan in an impromptu announcement like Mousefur did in the book.
      What I'm saying is Ashfur could've been a terribly cruel and obsessive love sick cat who did everything to both hurt Squirrelflight and drive her to surrender to him. He doesnt necessarily need to be Darkstripe levels of bad, he could be subtle about it. Like if he forced Squirrelflight to claim he was the father of Jaykit, Hollykit and Lionkit, I think he'd be satisfied with the ruse and we'd see Squirrelflight suffering from her lost relationship with Brambleclaw and the kits growing up with a great deal of tension around them. But Ashfur wouldn't be a mustache twirling villain, he'd be satisfied with the result and go about life as he did, just with seemingly kits of his own, with the she cat he wanted as his mate.
      I could see the tensions getting to him eventually as his and Squirrelflights interactions keep forcefully reminding him they're living a lie. Until he finally explodes at the three at some point revealing the truth and knocking the world out from under their paws. Sorta like how Hollyleaf did in Sunrise.
      I could still see him trying to bar their path in the fire to get rid of them, but Squirrelflight or Jayfeather says they won't look kindly on you if you kill 'your' kits.
      But since we're discussing how he could still go to StarClan he can't do that. He could be recklessly negligent, like run ahead while they're still trying to get clear and just not be helpful.
      I think if Ashfur had taken the less bloody approach and either just acted as a saboteur (keeping a close eye on Squirrelflights family to seek out opportunity to muck up their lives) or mastermind (learning the secret right away and forcing Squirrelflight and Leafpools kits to be 'his kits'). Him being allowed in StarClan would be somewhat more reasonable. I don't think we'd be thrilled but hey they've let an abusive mother in, a terrible cat who ditched his mate after she lost everything, so a yandere who spilled no blood would be fine,

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    • Yeah that’s finished, I just put a comma instead of a period.

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  • I'm obsessed w/ the name Rushingriver. I might make a kit named Rushingkit/Rushingpaw/Rushingbrook

    Idk yet. But, just gotta say I love the name.

    ok that's all, fanboy moment over.

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    • I liked it a lot too when I came up with it.

      I also liked how Rushingriver’s character developed she used to just be the mother who lost her kits to the various groups as a result of fleeing the seemingly dying MarshClan. To being pushed by her Clan and StarClan to take her sister’s place as their medicine cat after she’d returned.

      And she then became adopted mother to Reedspirit and yeah her name and story all turned out pretty great.

      And yeah go ahead, I don’t mind.

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  • Hi jet! If you have time, could you go to the BlogClan rp? We're waiting on Burningstar to do ceremonies. Thanks.

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  • Hi Jetty! How are you?

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  • ...that you suggested that Winterkit should become the medicine cat apprentice after Thistletuft dies?

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    • I suggested he become Pebblepaw's apprentice, so Pebblepaw had the chance to complete her training before Winterkit became one. Personally, I'd rather see Winterkit become a warrior than push Pebblepaw to become a medicine cat faster, but everyone else seems happy letting a certain med cat apprentice do as he pleases.

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    • Well, said medicine cat apprentice just r e a l  l y wants Winterkit to become a medicine cat again, which is kinda unfair since Winterkit gets to chances to be a medicine cat that way.

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    • I do agree can we continue this on skype? It'd be easier for me.

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  • Hello to anyone reading this! As stated above I am trying to become a senior warrior! I have been on BlogClan since August, 2015 and I've met many amazing people and helped contribute to BlogClan in a variety of ways that I think demonstrates that I am worthy of being a senior warrior. Here are some of them: 1. when Flo and Flame first made this wiki I created a page called the fan fiction library this would be the start of us organizing fanfics in a way that would make them east to fin and access for readers. As well as allow writers a great place to have in progress works and receive feedback. 2. I put forth amendments to the rules of becoming a senior warrior so that way it didn't become oversaturated and it would be an achievement members would strive for rather than see it as simply granted after being on BlogClan a while. 3. I am a Chat mod on the wiki and RP actively on the wiki. 4. I've written several articles and done my best to be as active as possible on BlogClan despite my busy schedule.

    I'm still working on a better solution to how fanfiction is displayed on BlogClan and even if I don't become a senior warrior I'll continue my efforts with it.

    Thank you all for reading this and please vouch for me to become a senior warrior it would mean a lot to me.

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  • Where are you we missssss you please come back because we have a tight RP schedule and we need you for the gathering

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  • Hiya, Jetty, dear :)

    So uh I know you're busy but the RPs have been at a standstill for a couple weeks because of the Gathering has come to a standstill.

    And the Gathering has come to a standstill because we're kind of waiting on Burningstar to talk. I've tried asking for you on Skype in the mod group that we don't use anymore, but you kinda disappeared off the radar and I'm starting to get just a teensy bit worried.

    I hope if you're perusing any wikis that you see this message and come back to give the RP a push so we can get the ball rolling again.

    I hope everything's okay!

    Embix

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  • Hi, for the Moonflower event on July 2nd, will Rushingriver of MarshClan be able to come?

    Thanks,

    Stoatkit STOATBRAMBLE For every mistake, there is an eraser. 12:34, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

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